There was a boy and a teacher in the depth of the place, they are talking about the responsability that exist in the school, something incidental.
In this place exists a lot of trees that fight to stay beside the forest, that I think is a beautiful place because you can walk and think in yourself.
In the air, you can feel the magic of the love with a little cold breeze in the same moment that you see all view of this.
A lot of cars on the stones are waitting for the moment that they will be used and the bugs are flying on the trees to eat a delicious flower that its a great panoramic imagen.
The time pass and the clouds will be blacks because the sun forget going out to shine the day.
Alone in the big forest, I walk to see the beautiful of the place and I think in the peace and in my family.
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There was a boy and a teacher in the depth of this school, they are talking about the responsability that exist in the school, something incidental. In this place exists a lot of trees that fight to stay beside the forest, that I think is a beautiful place because you can walk and think about yourself. In the air, you can feel the magic of love with a little cold breeze in the same moment that you see all view of this. A lot of cars on the stones are waitting for the moment that they will be used and the bugs are flying on the trees to eat a delicious flower. This is a great image. As the time pass and the clouds will be black because the sun forget going out to shine the day. Alone in the big forest, I walk to see the beautiful of the place and I think in the peace and in my family.
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Nice story, it seems you have imagination. Let´s work a little bit more in the style. Keep writing..
Your Teacher.
Arturo
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